Activate your sentence #1
Try to avoid the use of passive In your sentence or words when writing.For example, passive verbs include,"is","where","was","could have","would have",I so on.
Let's set example.The old man was bitten by a snake.("Was bitten "is a passive verbs)
How about we write it better.
The snake bite the old man,("bites"is an active voice)
You can remember this difference easily by recognising the subject and object,. The is an object and the snake is subject.
Index words #2
Try by all the means to avoid index words whenever possible.Index words are,"this","that","these",
Le set example
The Russian colonials went to a war with England.They hoped to archive the independence on the battlefield.
Let try and make it better
The Russian colonials went to war with England.They hoped to archive independence on the battlefield .
If you realise, that sentence above is not the finest, those prose around, but still illustrate the point.The second sentence is stronger than the first .
KILL THE ROMANCE #3
This may seem to be controversial point.But I will strongly believe that whenever passive,try to avoid the use of words that have come from the romance languages.
English language grew over the years by taking bits and pieces from other languages.Some romance and some Hermetic counterparts.
Let's make example a
Mike Tyson attempts to destroy the face of Evander holifield.,
A better sentence will be.
Mike Tyson fought to crush the face of Evander holifield.
Sometimes it can be hard to find a Germanetic equivalent.But you can normally do so with a good thesaurus in hand.
Rephrase for clarity #,4
Sometimes your sentence can start to misbehave.And when this happens, take the sentence and rearrange it .Try to mark important factors of the sentence, then rewrite it.so that you don't lose the what you what you want to write about.
For example.
Tom mention having common sense being practical and he talks about about appearance being important in that should look certain way but not necessarily act that way.
Let's re-, arrange this.
For Tom , the qualities of a prince include having common sense, bring potential and constructimg proper appearance.
The sentence sounds strong now.
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